Just read Dani-Girl; you owe me a box of Klennex. Seriously, it a fantastic story and it left me wanting more. Is it the opening gambit in a novel? If it isn't, then it should be; you have a winning character there.BTW: congratulations on making Flash Fiction Online; you are in good company.
It's excellent, Gay. I like how you moved things around at the end.I also like the changes you made toward the end, you omitted some stuff and it still makes perfect sense.Very nicely done. I really like it.
Thanks you guys. I really appreciate it. I was a little panicked the other day when I reread it.
Gay, I loved this one. Very well done. The use of the rules framing the story was excellent. Congrats!
It's very powerful. Well done.
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Just read Dani-Girl; you owe me a box of Klennex.
ReplyDeleteSeriously, it a fantastic story and it left me wanting more. Is it the opening gambit in a novel? If it isn't, then it should be; you have a winning character there.
BTW: congratulations on making Flash Fiction Online; you are in good company.
It's excellent, Gay. I like how you moved things around at the end.
ReplyDeleteI also like the changes you made toward the end, you omitted some stuff and it still makes perfect sense.
Very nicely done. I really like it.
Thanks you guys. I really appreciate it. I was a little panicked the other day when I reread it.
ReplyDeleteGay, I loved this one. Very well done. The use of the rules framing the story was excellent. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteIt's very powerful. Well done.
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