Thursday, October 02, 2008

DANI-GIRL at Flash Fiction Online NOW

New story "Dani-Girl's Guide to Getting Everything Right" is up at Flash Fiction Online TODAY.

Here's a direct link to the story:


K.C. Ball said...

Just read Dani-Girl; you owe me a box of Klennex.

Seriously, it a fantastic story and it left me wanting more. Is it the opening gambit in a novel? If it isn't, then it should be; you have a winning character there.

BTW: congratulations on making Flash Fiction Online; you are in good company.

Shameless said...

It's excellent, Gay. I like how you moved things around at the end.

I also like the changes you made toward the end, you omitted some stuff and it still makes perfect sense.

Very nicely done. I really like it.

Gay Degani said...

Thanks you guys. I really appreciate it. I was a little panicked the other day when I reread it.

Erin said...

Gay, I loved this one. Very well done. The use of the rules framing the story was excellent. Congrats!

sylvia said...

It's very powerful. Well done.