Just read Dani-Girl; you owe me a box of Klennex. Seriously, it a fantastic story and it left me wanting more. Is it the opening gambit in a novel? If it isn't, then it should be; you have a winning character there.BTW: congratulations on making Flash Fiction Online; you are in good company.
It's excellent, Gay. I like how you moved things around at the end.I also like the changes you made toward the end, you omitted some stuff and it still makes perfect sense.Very nicely done. I really like it.
Thanks you guys. I really appreciate it. I was a little panicked the other day when I reread it.
Gay, I loved this one. Very well done. The use of the rules framing the story was excellent. Congrats!
It's very powerful. Well done.
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Just read Dani-Girl; you owe me a box of Klennex.
Seriously, it a fantastic story and it left me wanting more. Is it the opening gambit in a novel? If it isn't, then it should be; you have a winning character there.
BTW: congratulations on making Flash Fiction Online; you are in good company.
It's excellent, Gay. I like how you moved things around at the end.
I also like the changes you made toward the end, you omitted some stuff and it still makes perfect sense.
Very nicely done. I really like it.
Thanks you guys. I really appreciate it. I was a little panicked the other day when I reread it.
Gay, I loved this one. Very well done. The use of the rules framing the story was excellent. Congrats!
It's very powerful. Well done.
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