This is a hell of a story, Gay, courageous and remarkable. I absolutely love it. So glad it found a worthy home.
I like it! wv: perst
Gay, I LOVED this! It was so vivid - my favorite phrase was "tongue of dark air against your ankle."And that ending? It was both beautiful and frightening.
Wow! Thanks you guys. It means a lot to me to get these kinds of comments from the three of you.
Excellent work Gay - powerfully good words you've been stringing together!!
Sweet piece of fantasy, Gay. ;)
The piece is a work of art in and of itself. Wonderfully written in the second person. My favorite line - "tongue of dark air against your ankle."This is a visual trip!
Fabulous, Gay, or as a NY friend of mine is forever saying: Fabu!HelenStraight From Hel
Jason, KC, Jodi, and Helen. Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story. It's so cool to actually have real readers out there! May you be blessed with karma of your choosing!
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